Okay, we've got this boy. He's kind of dorky. But I'm thinking of a
latter-day McCauley Culkin, really. Cute and charming to everyone
watching the movie, but for some reason his character is perceived as
awkward and dull. Suspension of disbelief - it's big with the younger
audiences right now. You know, sarcasm and all. Anyhow, he goes to this
nice high school and has a normal existence and all. He's a smart kid,
not too popular. Think "pubescent David Byrne". Geek chic - scores well
with the indie film crowd.
So this kid wants to run with the in crowd, but he's too
dorky. He has some other geek friends, but he yearns for something more.
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Then one day he meets this alien girl. Because this is in the future, you
know, when aliens are commonplace and all at high school. This provides
much of the comic relief in this film as humans are constantly learning
the pitfalls of social interaction with aliens. I'm thinking like someone
is talking to what they think is the alien's face but it's his butt, and he
gets all angry or something. Or trying to make out with an alien, but he
gets zapped by some power-thing or something. Laff! We can probably work
in a montage of funny vignettes like these.
Anyhow, this alien girl is ugly and/or a big dork, but this guy befriends
her because of his big heart of gold. Maybe he sees her drop her books or
fail a geometry quiz or something, so he helps her out, and she's really
thankful or something, and they start talking and he realizes she's really nice.
Regardless, everyone else thinks she's ugly or whatever.
Or maybe she's an invisible alien. Yeah. I'm not set on it. If she's
invisible, then all his friends think he's insane for talking to "himself"
all the time. Which, you understand, he's not - he's talking to this alien.
We can represent her by a faint outline or something so the audience doesn't
get confused and also think he's talking to himself. But it sure would be
easier to just get an ugly girl.
So they're friends and all. Maybe another video montage shows this. Them
running in the fields. Them picking flowers. Them laughing over coffee.
But then the boy finds out that the big high school dance is coming up. And
the way he does this is he sees this other cute girl putting up flyers that say
something like "Big High School Dance Coming Up" with pictures of balloons
or clowns on it. Now this cute girl is a member of the student council so
she's popular and all, but she's also nice. She says hi to our guy as she's
putting up posters. Just, you know, being nice. But he takes it the wrong
way. He totally gets a crush on her.
We could do a shot of her in soft focus, maybe wearing a feather boa or something.
So now we've got conflict, you know? Because he wants to ask out the cute
student council member, but the ugly/invisible girl expects him to ask her
out because he's her only friend and all. The ugly girl is always dropping
hints about the dance, but he's always dreaming of the cute girl (it would
be funny to show a "thought bubble" with the cute girl in it coming out of
his head while the ugly chick blabbers at him). Maybe we even see her
getting ready for the dance, like with her mom sewing up a tacky "fancy"
dress and all. This scene would be a lot better if the girl were invisible,
though, because the dress would just be hanging there in midair. Plus, it's
not clear how test audiences will respond to an ugly girl getting so much
Okay, I just had the billion dollar idea of the century: the student
council girl is more than just cute - she's hot. Foxy! Like Jessica Alba
or whoever we can get. Sexy outfits, short skirts, lowcut tops with nipples
showing, all that.
But, get this: she's also not a human, she's an alien. But
she looks just like a human, only with maybe a cute antenna or weird eyes or
green skin or something. Nothing that detracts from the sex aspect.
This way, we can get the 12-25 male demographic drooling over the sexiest
shots we can get, but the parents don't get upset because we'd just be
showing alien skin.
If she's an alien, then when we show the guy daydreaming about her, we can
show her naked, and it won't matter if she's under 18 or not. Brilliant!
Anyhow, it's obvious this guy has almost no chance of going to the dance with
this hot girl, because he's just a normal not-too-popular guy. We show the
hottie getting hit on by all these buff guys. Maybe show her having sex
with them, too.
You know, this is starting to sound like a John Hughes film. See if we can
get him to direct it. Tell him none of that Beethoven or Home Alone kiddie
fare, we're talking real adult high school stuff. It'll be his big comeback
film. Retro is big with the kids right now.
Anyhow, there's lots of time used up showing the boy dealing with his
decision - I guess it's a "moral quandary" - of who to ask out. And we intersperse
that with images of the ugly girl moping about, but a lot more images of the
hot girl going swimming, playing tennis, giggling, whatever.
Now here's the clever part: We see the boy decide to ask out the hot thing.
And it seems like he's just made the wrong choice. But it
turns out that the hottie doesn't really speak English that well (which is
why we've only heard her say "hi" so far to him) and what he said to her
sounds like an insult in her language or something and she tries to eat him,
because her species does that kind of thing.
We then kind of change gears for a second and show the space-cops showing
up, busting down the school doors/walls and blasting the heck out of the hot
chick with their lasers and missiles. I'm seeing lots of cool pyrotechnics,
CGI, and all sorts of blood all over. Here is where it's brilliant again
that she was an alien, because the blood can be green, so the parents don't
get mad that it's human blood, and it's not immoral to kill an alien.
This, of course, launches a war between her home planet and earth, and we
have lots of cool shots of space ship armadas and planets exploding and
lasers and so forth, and I guess we'll show Earth triumphing, because we are
going to sell this on Earth.
At the end of the battle, there's a royal medal ceremony at the
White House celebrating all the victors. Lots of robots.
But back to the main plot line. We get back to the boy, who I guess has
cleaned all the green alien goo off of him by now, asking out the
ugly/invisible alien girl to the dance, because he doesn't have any other
options at this point. She's really happy and stuff, maybe also because her
brother was a brave victor in the space battle that just took place - see if
we can work that in. And she says yes, she'll go with him to the dance.
Now here's the part I still haven't worked out yet.
See, the girl turns out to not be ugly or invisible now. If we go the ugly route,
maybe the girl was really a parasite or something in this ugly host, right?
And she suddenly switches host bodies to a far svelter, more buxom hottie
Maybe she switches hosts because the ugly host body died or got a
dent in it or something. Or maybe the ugly girl was a shapeshifter and was
testing the boy all along, but she wasn't really shy and is in fact really
outgoing and wants to have sex.
If we went with the invisible route, maybe the war that just took place
sends a big shock of gamma radiation or neutrons through Earth at that very
moment when he asks her to the dance, making her permanently visible, and it
turns out she's a total bombshell, like in the other option. What I'm
getting at here is: sex. Hot hot hot. You know.
So they go to the dance and have a great time. Maybe we could turn it into
a joint high school dance/war-winning ball and so a lot of the hero fighters
from the battle scene are there dancing in their cool space fighting outfits
Also, lots of robots dancing too. That's always
funny. And they play cool techno space music.
So the boy has learned a lot about not judging people by their covers,
especially now that the girl is, as I mentioned, hot hot hot, selling
tickets tickets tickets with the 12-25 demographic.
And the denouement of the film has the boy and the girl getting a room at a
hotel after the dance and they try to make out and have sex but it turns out
that her species has like four sexes, none of which are compatible with
those on Earth, so it doesn't work out anyway, but you get the point. And
it's a nice light note to end the film on.
And the moral of the story (we could scroll this at the end of the film like
in that part of Star Wars) is something like: if you just learn to love
what's inside a person, eventually they'll turn out to be really sexy, even if
they have to change host bodies or get lots of plastic surgery.